Translation draft two

To choose TV programs carefully is important. Although TV is the most important channel which gives us information and entertainment, it probably have some defect.Some programs are full of violence and lust which do harm to teenagers. Spend too much time watching TV will hurt your eyesight. Therefore, we should choose TV programs which are good for our body and mind.The most essential thing is don't be a couch potato.

Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. It can not only help students to hand in an assignment but also help people to deliver information in time. When you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. But you should remind yourself, don't sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of the parents don't like their children depend on computer too much, BBS is wasting time.

Translation draft one

To choose TV programs carefully is important. Although TV is the most important channel which give us information and entertainment, it probably have some defect.
Some programs are full of violence and lust which do harm to teenagers. Spend too much time to watch TV will hurt your eyesight. Therefore, we should choose TV programs which are good for our body and mind.The most important thing is don’t be a couch potato.


Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. It can not only help students to hand in an assignment but also help people to deliver information in time. When you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. But you should remind yourself, don’t sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of the parents don’t like their children depend computer too much, BBS is waste time.

Tony's Bad Grade----draft 2

Today when I went home. I saw my brother and father were in the living room. The man who sat on the chair is my father .And the boy that stood by my father is my older brother Tony.I heard my father shouted with Tony . He said that Tony what a bad grade you got.He stood in that ashamedly by a face. Because of his bad grade, my father was very angry,Tony promised he will not only work harder but also get high grade next time.My father did not look so angry. Finally he ate dinner with whole family.

Tony's Bad Gread----draft 1

Today when I went home. I saw my brother and father were in the living room.
The man who sat on the chair is my father .
And the boy that stood by my father is my older brother Tony.
I heard my father shouted with Tony . He said that Tony what a bad grade you get.
He stands in that ashamedly by a face.
Because of hes bad grade, my father was very angry,Tony promised he will not only work hard but also get high grade next time.
My father does not look so angery. Finally he ate dinner with whole family.

Tips for Staying Healthy.--draft 2

There are some tips for staying healthy.First of all, we need to have a balanced diet.On the other words, we should eat more vegetables and fruit than eat not too salty , sweet and spicy.And drink more water.Next, doing exercise is necessary. And we had better do exercise at least 30 minutes 3 times a week.In addition, we should get enough sleep. If we often stay up too late, it will hurt our body.Most importantly we should keep in good mood. If we stay in a good mood, we'll look not only happier but also younger. In conclusion, these four tips will help us staying healthy.