Translation draft one
To choose TV programs carefully is important. Although TV is the most important channel which give us information and entertainment, it probably have some defect.
Some programs are full of violence and lust which do harm to teenagers. Spend too much time to watch TV will hurt your eyesight. Therefore, we should choose TV programs which are good for our body and mind.The most important thing is don’t be a couch potato.
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. It can not only help students to hand in an assignment but also help people to deliver information in time. When you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. But you should remind yourself, don’t sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of the parents don’t like their children depend computer too much, BBS is waste time.
Some programs are full of violence and lust which do harm to teenagers. Spend too much time to watch TV will hurt your eyesight. Therefore, we should choose TV programs which are good for our body and mind.The most important thing is don’t be a couch potato.
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. It can not only help students to hand in an assignment but also help people to deliver information in time. When you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. But you should remind yourself, don’t sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of the parents don’t like their children depend computer too much, BBS is waste time.
posted by 娜娜 at 8:56 PM
7 Comments:
"Although TV is the most important channel which give us information and entertainment, it probably have some defect.""give" should add "s".
"Most of the parents don’t like their children depend computer too much, BBS is waste time." Between "depend" and "computer" should add "on".
"Spend too much time watching TV will hurt your eyesight." is better.
"BBS is waste time"
maybe you can change into
"BBS is wasting time"
I think it's better to add a "but" in front of "it probably have some defect."
Because the sentences"TV is the most important channel....." and
"it probably have some defect." are contrary.
Maybe some of "important" can change into "essential"
"Spend too much time to watch TV will hurt your eyesight." change into " If you spend too much time watching TV , it would hurt your eyesight."
It can not only help students hand in an assignment .....就好了!!
"BBS is waste time"→"It's waste time to use the BBS."
We should discipline ourself don't sit in front of the computer for a long time. Because sit a long time will hurt our eyesingt.
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