My bedroom-Draft 1
My bedroom is a beautiful place. Like most room, it’s rectangle.
When you enter the door, the bookcase is on the right ,
and the wardrobe is on the left. The desk is in front of the bookcase.
There is a computer next to the desk. The rug is in the middle of the room.
The bed is on the left and the desk is on the right of rug.
There is a large window between the bed and the computer.
The rug is in back of the window.
by nana
When you enter the door, the bookcase is on the right ,
and the wardrobe is on the left. The desk is in front of the bookcase.
There is a computer next to the desk. The rug is in the middle of the room.
The bed is on the left and the desk is on the right of rug.
There is a large window between the bed and the computer.
The rug is in back of the window.
by nana
7 Comments:
Good!
Your room must be very comfortabl!
You wrote very nice.
I think your room is really beautiful.
Good. I think your room is neat.
Oh~I like your room .It looks like a lots of things.Great!
You should write a conclusion sentence.
I just want to say " your room is very comfortable."
I hope I will have a computer in my room just like you!
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