Nana's self introduction
Hello! Everybody I'm nana. I'm number 4.
I'm 16 years old. I was born in Tainan city.
I love to read novels and comsic books.
Because I love reading.
Also, I enjoy listening to music. It can help me relax.
Sometimes I like to write novels , articles and poems in Chinese.
This is my special skill , so I want to be a writer in the future.
Welcome to my bolgger.
I hope you can give me some advices.
I'm 16 years old. I was born in Tainan city.
I love to read novels and comsic books.
Because I love reading.
Also, I enjoy listening to music. It can help me relax.
Sometimes I like to write novels , articles and poems in Chinese.
This is my special skill , so I want to be a writer in the future.
Welcome to my bolgger.
I hope you can give me some advices.
posted by 娜娜 at 7:36 PM
4 Comments:
Not bad.
Check this sentence"I born in Tainan city."
Moreover, someone loves to do something or doing something.
And someone enjoys doing something.
Watch the usage of these verbs.
"I enjoy listen to music."
maybe you should change listen this word to "listening".
"I love read novels and comsic books."--->"read" can change to "reading" or "to read"
Change"I love read novels and comsic books.".love to read...or
love reading.
I thing you'r dream will come true. Benedicite!
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