Making Decisions--draft~1
Growing up means making my own decisions. I think that I am old enough to be responsible for my own decisions. I am not a little and innocent girl anymore.
I evolve separateness and can not to depend on other people. Therefore, I should start to learn not only how to make my own decisions but also responsible for it.
The hardest decision that I ever made was to think which senior high school I wanted to enter. From the beginning my mom disagreed on my advice. She wanted me to enter senior high school but I wanted to enter vocation senior high school.
Nevertheless she still took my advice, and I started my new life.
I evolve separateness and can not to depend on other people. Therefore, I should start to learn not only how to make my own decisions but also responsible for it.
The hardest decision that I ever made was to think which senior high school I wanted to enter. From the beginning my mom disagreed on my advice. She wanted me to enter senior high school but I wanted to enter vocation senior high school.
Nevertheless she still took my advice, and I started my new life.
posted by 娜娜 at 8:16 PM
5 Comments:
"I evolve separateness and can not to depend on other people."-->"I evolve separateness and can not depend on other people."
"but also responsible for it.
"-->"but also be responsible for it."
"From the beginning my mom disagreed on my advice"
maybe you can plus ","
"From the beginning, my mom disagreed on my advice"
a little >>> "a child"
I evolve separateness and can not to depend on other people. >>>and 後面沒有主詞好像怪怪的
"I should start to learn not only how to make my own decisions but also responsible for it."--> "but also be responsible for them." is better.
"I evolve separateness and can not to depend on other people." change into "I evolve separateness instead of depending on other people." is better.
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