Computers--draft~1
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. The most essential operation of the computer is to store and retrieve the information we need. It also offer us entertainments, communication with others on the internet and store information to help us to do the homework. Even we can get news not only immediately but also quickly. Among others, it has been widely used in our life, for example to control the work of machines, help students to do their homework, and so on. The computer has a tremendous influence on human beings. Last, we can't live without computers.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. Firstly, it is convenient for me to do many things like do homework, shopping, watching movie and cartoon, and so on. Secondly, it is useful and all-purpose. We can use it to communicate with others on the internet, we also can control machines by it, and so forth. Last but not the least, it is quick and did not cost a lot. We can use it to call our friends and chat with them online, we don't spend any money and wait for a long time. For these three reasons, I have a liking for computers and it has become an indispensable tool for me.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. Firstly, it is convenient for me to do many things like do homework, shopping, watching movie and cartoon, and so on. Secondly, it is useful and all-purpose. We can use it to communicate with others on the internet, we also can control machines by it, and so forth. Last but not the least, it is quick and did not cost a lot. We can use it to call our friends and chat with them online, we don't spend any money and wait for a long time. For these three reasons, I have a liking for computers and it has become an indispensable tool for me.
posted by 娜娜 at 8:44 PM
6 Comments:
"communication with others on the internet "
the word "internet" may change into "Internet"
"It also offer us entertainments,"--> "offer" should add a "s".
"We can use it to communicate with others on the internet, we also can control machines by it, and so forth." change into "We can use it to communicate with others,control machines, and so forth." is better.
"Firstly, it is convenient for me to do many things like do homework, "-->"first,it is..."
,it is quick and did not cost a lot.有點不太懂這句的意思，是不用花很多錢的意思嗎？
cost 後面要接受詞→it cost a lot of money
haha...we both like the computer.It is really convenient to us.
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