Autobiography--draft 1~ paragraph 3,4

I had been a deputy class leader for three years in my junior high school.
It’s a tiring job but I learn a lot from it. For example I know how to communicate with people and deal with many things. Although it made me feel very tired, I still persisted in this job.
I won a prize which is the match of the composition in my junior high school. This match was held by Tainan Municipal Government. I was so surprised that I could get this prize. But I still feel very happy. It let me feel more confident and ardor in write article. This two experiences let me learn many things and skill from it.

In the near future, I want to go to university. There are too many things that not only should know but also I don’t know. After learning these things can help me get good job. And I want to be a writer someday . Because of my hobby. I like to write articles and poems in Chinese. Oneday I hope my dream will come true.

Autobiography--draft 2~ paragraph 1,2

17 years ago, March 24th an amazing thing happened. A strong baby girl with many hairs was born in Tainan city. Who is she ? It's me, Vanesa Shi.Who is the tallest person in my family? Of course is my father. My mother is a dependable woman. My older sister is good at math but her English is very bad. My English is better than her but my math is bad. So we can help each other. I love my family very much.
I have many hobbies.First, I like to read novels and comic books. Reading help me relax. And I like to go to the school library.It 's very convenient. Second ,I like to write articles and poem in Chinese. It helps me not only express my feelings but also keep a record of my daily life.

Autobiography--draft 1~ paragraph 1,2

17 years ago, March 24th an amazing thing happened. A strong baby girl with many hairs was born in Tainan city. Who is she ? It's me Vanesa Shi.Who is the tallest person in my family? Of course is my father. My mother is a dependable woman. My older sister is good at math but her Engish is very bad. My English is better than her but my math is bad. So we can help each other. I love my family very much.

I have many hobbies.First I like to read novels and comic books. Reading help me relax. And I like to go to the school library.It 's very convenient. Second I like to write articles and poem in Chinese. It help me not only express my feelings but also keep a record of my daily life.