My bedroom ---draft 2

My bedroom is a beautiful place. Like most room, it's rectangle.When you enter the door, the bookcase is on the right ,and the wardrobe is on the left. The desk is in front of the bookcase.There is a computer next to the desk. The rug is in the middle of the room.The bed is on the left and the desk is on the right of rug.There is a large window between the bed and the computer.The rug is in back of the window.I love my bedroom the most. by nana

Learning English---draft 1

It is hard for me to learn English. Although I am interested in English,
I still think to learn English is hard. There are three reasons.
First, I am not good at memorize words.
Because I don't know much about K.K.phonetic symbol.
Second, I can not understand grammar very crystal.
It is not simple. Third, I can't write correct sentences.
Because of the two points upward. Rome wasn't built in a day.
I want to improve my English. So, I'll try my best to do the best work.

An Embarrassing Experience──Draft 2.

Last Friday, I got up a little late , so I went to school immediately.
On the way to school.I went to buy breakfast at 7-11.I didn't see my wallet very clear.
I took the food and drink.They cost me 50 dollars. But I didn't know I took only 10 dollars.
I gave 10 dollars to the clerk. And he looked at me for a moment.Oh my god !
I was very embarrassed. Luckily I found 50 dollars in my bag.So now when I go shopping , I will check my wallet.

My bedroom-Draft 1

My bedroom is a beautiful place. Like most room, it’s rectangle.
When you enter the door, the bookcase is on the right ,
and the wardrobe is on the left. The desk is in front of the bookcase.
There is a computer next to the desk. The rug is in the middle of the room.
The bed is on the left and the desk is on the right of rug.
There is a large window between the bed and the computer.
The rug is in back of the window.
by nana