My Two Friends Are Different in many Ways~draft 1

Two of my friends Jam and Wriver are different in many ways. First of all, Wriver is 167cm while Jam is157cm. Next, Wriver has a slender figure and her weight is 48kg. On the other hand, Jam is 58kg and looks heavier than Wriver. Thirdly,
Wriver's hair style is long and straight, whereas Jam's is short and wavy. Last but not the least,Wriver is introvert, cleaver and shy. Unlike Wriver Jam is extrovert, funny and talkative. Lastly, Wriver always looks the negative side of things, in contrast with Wriver Jam always looks the bright side of things. Even though Wriver and Jam are very different, they still the best friends of mine.

My Favorite Season ~draft 1

My favorite season is Fall. First, I like the voice which people step on the leaves. The voice is tremendous and make me feel great. Second, I like the scenery in Fall. The most beautiful scenery in Fall is maple leaves. Especialy when the maple leaves are dropping. Last, I can eat much tasty food. Much food begin be saled in Fall. So, in Fall I can eat much delicious food that I can't eat in other season. Because of these three reasons, my favorite season is Fall.

"The First Time I Spoke to the Whole Class draft~2"

The first time I spoke to the whole class. It happened on a summer day when I was a fifth grade primary school student. One day, our teacher pronounced an essential thing which was we had to read the text a loud tomorrow. What a terrible news for me. Because I had never spoken to the whole class before. It made me very nervous and I didn't know what I can do tomorrow.The teacher walked into class and it is time for us to read the text a loud. For a while, it was my turn to platform. I walked very slowly to the platform, my hands were sweaty. Everybody looked at me, finally I stood on the platform. I started speaking to the whole class for 3 minutes and I turned back to my seat.My face became red and my heart beat very fast. But it really exciting and I will never forget.